1986. Some
works of literature use the element of time in a distinct way. The
chronological sequence of events may be altered, or time may be suspended or
accelerated. Choose a novel, an epic, or a play of recognized literary merit
and show how the author's manipulation of time contributes to the effectiveness
of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot
The
perception of time through a work of literature changes how the audience views
and understands the material. Many
authors use time normally by arranging events chronologically and not having
any emphasis on the passage of time. However,
other authors make shifts in time noticeable and use it as a part of their
work. Arthur Miller uses time as an
important element in portraying the main character, Willy Loman, in his play Death of a Salesman.
Willy
Loman is troubled character who seems to slowly loose his mind as the play
progresses. At the beginning of the
play, Willy notices that while he is driving, he is slowly drifting off into
memories and forgetting to watch the road.
This worries him because he can’t seem to understand why his mind keeps
on wandering. These memories become more
real to him until at the end of the play, Willy slips into events from his
past, talking and acting out the memories as if he were really there. This makes the audience think that Willy is
going crazy.
This
shifting of time contributes to the work because one of the main conflicts in
this play is Willy struggling to understand everything that is going on in his
life. The changes in time not only help
to show how fragmented Willy’s mind is, but also how bewildered he is in a
world of unknown. After Willy’s “flashbacks,”
he returns to the real world and is confused at what has happened. People judge him because they think he is
scatterbrained and as a result, don’t want to deal with him. Willy doesn’t understand what he has done to
get disapproval. The flashbacks also remind
him of events in his life that cause him to question things in his life
now. He remembers all the promise Biff
had with football and wonders why Biff has not been successful ever since. He remembers all the promises of a life as a
salesman and wonders why his life hasn’t turned out the way he wanted it to. The events from his past keep creating more
and more questions for Willy and contribute to his bewilderment.
Willy’s
confusion at life and society helps the effectiveness of the play because it shows
how industrial America destroys dreams and nothing can stop it. Time is an uncontrollable force and nothing
Willy or any of the other characters do can stop it. Willy falls victim to these changes in time
and the only thing he can do is to float along hopelessly. In the commercialism of America, all Willy wants
is money and glory, yet no amount of success can prevent Willy from destroying
himself. In Death of a Salesman, time is used to portray the character of Willy
Loman and helps to show the futility of life in industrial America.
This is a really well structured argument and answer to the question. One thing I would do is add the effectiveness in your thesis somewhere so you can connect it in each paragraph so that in the end, you can add it all up to what he is saying. You did a really good job in the conclusion, I just think it needs to be in the rest of the paper as well.
ReplyDeleteI really like the argument you made and I think you bring in some very strong details to support your argument. I especially liked your last paragraph where you talk about how time and futility could be connected in DOS. I think one area you could improve on would be adding strong topic sentences to your paragraphs to help the reader get the main idea you are addressing in that paragraph. When you say "This shifting of time contributes to the work because one of the main conflicts in this play is Willy struggling to understand everything that is going on in his life." it sounds long and vague. Maybe say something concise like "time shifts help to show Willy's bewilderment at his business failure and show his disconnection from reality".
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